Change the narrative style by using direct speeches.

"May I come in, sir?" A boy standing at the door said to me. Then without waiting for my reply the boy entered the room and said, "Sir, I have come from Palashpur with a letter from Mr. Ajit Bose." "Ajit Bose! How is he?"
I said smilingly. "He is not well. He has been suffering from serious illness for two years," the boy said. "How sad it is! May God cure him".

 Standing at the door, a boy asked me respectfully if he (b) might come in. Then without waiting for my reply, the boy entered the room and told me respectfully that he (b) had come from Palashpur with a letter from Mr Ajit Bose. I became surprised at the mention of the name, Ajit Bose and asked him smilingly how he (Ajit) was. The boy replied that he (Ajit) was not well and said that he (Ajit) had been suffering from a serious illness for two years. Hearing this, I exclaimed with sorrow that it was very sad and prayed that God might cure him (Ajit)